Abigail, this is an amazing poem! I really enjoyed reading about your view on happiness and how you are joyful no matter what happens. I specifically liked when you said “it is realizing the simple fact that / life is hard; you cannot control what people do / but you can control what resonates within your spirit.” Those lines were very impactful and I look forward to reading what you write next!

Hi Abigail,
I really loved reading your poem! The world needs more joy and I love reading that you try to stay joyful regardless of other circumstances. My favorite line from the poem was, “but you can control what resonates with your spirit.” I am so excited to read more of your writing!!
–Maggie

Dear Abigail,
I like your poem “Everything You Can and Cannot See”, because I love the way how you made a connection between the nature and your personal life. Stanza that stands out for me is “I am from everything you see and everything you do not see”. it made me think a lot about things we can’t see, such ass our feelings we don’t share with others and just keep for ourselves. Thanks for your poem. I look forward to seeing what you make next. I hope you will write another amazing poem such as this one, love it!

Dear Abigail:
I am fascinated by the way you described your emotion, your poem, “Everything You Can and Cannot See,” because you managed to show different emotions through experiences. You used different locations which all described different emotion such as the word use of “pain” and “light” but are yet still are where you’re from.
One line that stands out for me is, “I am from the soil underneath the ground, And the light from the sky ” I think this line is intriguing because both of those things are opposite and can take such a deeper meaning.
Another set of lines that stands out for me is, “I am from the frowns and the tears, From the laughs and the giggles” I think these lines is interesting because you chose two set of things that are opposite which might suggest you are everything in between.
Your poem reminds me of a poem that I once read. The poem was about a woman who thought she was everything in her neighborhood because she was born their, She listed a number of things that were opposite of each other. She also described herself also as everything in between.
Thanks for your poem. I look forward to seeing what you make next. I really like how u describe yourself as different things. I also liked how you described the emotion of these things, also describing the things that they do as well.

Dear Abigail,
I like your poem “Everything You Can and Cannot See”, because I love the way how you made a connection between the nature and your personal life. Stanza that stands out for me is “I am from everything you see and everything you do not see”. it made me think a lot about things we can’t see, such ass our feelings we don’t share with others and just keep for ourselves. Thanks for your poem. I look forward to seeing what you make next. I hope you will write another amazing poem such as this one, love it!