Dear, Aaron

I am shocked about your poem “Her cries of liberation,” because this poem hits very hard. These women have gone through so many things and yet things never get better because other people are looked down on them for who they are. Also the color of their skin but yet these women never give up and keep fighting nonstop for themselves.

One sentence that stands out to me is ” Her bloodline was like roots of a tree.” I think this is powerful because the whole reason why they are still fighting this battle for liberation is their heritage. The heritage of these women and their people is not the best but the worst thing is that other people of other races have not moved on so they choose to treat these women like less. They are strong women that have to fight for liberation because their heritage has they chained and bound to go through horrible things.

Thank you for writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because I like to know and read things that have to do with race. Also what people do about it is because I think that depending on what people do I find it to be super powerful and incredible.

Sincerely, Dulce

This poem is really good, I love how thoughtful it is.

This is really a unique way to show that your a fan of there illustrations.

i think the illustrations we’re very good as well its very eye catching and gives you a better idea and image of what happened.