“Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep” -Scott Adams. From the time I began creating imaginary scenes out of real life situations to when I started building a business out of fashion in high school, creativity was and has always been one of my biggest passions. I find myself constantly pushing the envelope and exploring the world of art in the most unique and fascinating ways.

When something makes me lose track of time and I get lost in the moment, I recognize it is significant to me. The most prevalent example of this occurring in my life is when I am acting or creating imaginary scenes from real life situations. I think about acting more than anything else on a daily basis and nearly every situation in which I find myself. The complexity of acting is fascinating because it allows for me to be a part of an idea that is typically larger than life, out of this world, or simply an alternate reality. In my head I imagine a camera ready to film everyday scenarios and I analyze how I would approach each scene through multiple different emotions or themes. I’ve always noticed my brain works more creatively in situations where people wouldn’t typically give the issue at hand much thought and I imagine myself pushing the envelope.  Ultimately, character creation is what captivates me. It is the time with a script where I feel I am actually connecting with someone unique. I find acting enticing because I tend to overthink things in life and acting allows me to prepare for various scenarios that I’ve contemplated too much previously in real life situations. In daily interactions or conversations, I always think to myself how I could have expressed or presented myself differently and acting allows for me to fantasize a new outcome. 

Let me share another example of what makes me lose track of time on something I really enjoy. Being part of the fashion and branding world while building a business around it on my own has been a major distraction…in a good way. I’ve always found much pleasure in expressing myself in the way I dress and I think of it as art. Putting an outfit together allows for a daily creative outlet and during high school I have been able to mix the worlds of clothing and business. Since my sophomore year, I have been buying and selling pieces of clothing through an online portal I created and have continued doing so to this day. It allows me to see the details of running a business whether it be from communicating to customers around the world or being able to calculate profits from total revenue. I find it extremely rewarding going about my day while getting notifications that one of my items sold and my focus immediately turns to fulfilling the sale as everything else becomes secondary. I have been able to make this my job throughout high school. I hope to build a brand of my own and create clothing and other merchandise inspired by some of my favorite designers and creators.

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What else might I add to this essay? “Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep” -Scott Adams. From the time I began creating imaginary scenes out of real life situations to when I started building a business out of fashion in high school, creativity was and has always been one of my biggest passions. I find myself constantly pushing the envelope and exploring the world of art in the most unique and fascinating ways.

When something makes me lose track of time and I get lost in the moment, I recognize it is significant to me. The most prevalent example of this occurring in my life is when I am acting or creating imaginary scenes from real life situations. I think about acting more than anything else on a daily basis and nearly every situation in which I find myself. The complexity of acting is fascinating because it allows for me to be a part of an idea that is typically larger than life, out of this world, or simply an alternate reality. In my head I imagine a camera ready to film everyday scenarios and I analyze how I would approach each scene through multiple different emotions or themes. I’ve always noticed my brain works more creatively in situations where people wouldn’t typically give the issue at hand much thought and I imagine myself pushing the envelope.  Ultimately, character creation is what captivates me. It is the time with a script where I feel I am actually connecting with someone unique. I find acting enticing because I tend to overthink things in life and acting allows me to prepare for various scenarios that I’ve contemplated too much previously in real life situations. In daily interactions or conversations, I always think to myself how I could have expressed or presented myself differently and acting allows for me to fantasize a new outcome. 

Let me share another example of what makes me lose track of time on something I really enjoy. Being part of the fashion and branding world while building a business around it on my own has been a major distraction…in a good way. I’ve always found much pleasure in expressing myself in the way I dress and I think of it as art. Putting an outfit together allows for a daily creative outlet and during high school I have been able to mix the worlds of clothing and business. Since my sophomore year, I have been buying and selling pieces of clothing through an online portal I created and have continued doing so to this day. It allows me to see the details of running a business whether it be from communicating to customers around the world or being able to calculate profits from total revenue. I find it extremely rewarding going about my day while getting notifications that one of my items sold and my focus immediately turns to fulfilling the sale as everything else becomes secondary. I have been able to make this my job throughout high school. I hope to build a brand of my own and create clothing and other merchandise inspired by some of my favorite designers and creators.

Your essay beautifully captures your passion for creativity and art. It’s evident in your narrative about creating imaginary scenes and building a fashion business. Now, let’s focus on the “So What?” section. Reflect on how these experiences shaped you and why they matter to others. How have these creative pursuits prepared you for college and beyond? How will they make a difference in your chosen field or community?

How about exploring these three paths:

1. The skills you gained from these experiences.

2. The impact of your creativity on others.

3. How your creative pursuits align with your future goals.

Which of these areas do you want to delve into? Or do you have another idea?

Yeah, I think I should think about how my creativity might has impacted others

Great choice! Reflect on the ways your creative pursuits, like your acting or fashion business, have influenced others. Consider how your work in fashion has made others feel or how your acting performances have moved audiences. Has your creativity inspired others to explore their own artistic sides? Remember, the “So What?” isn’t just about your experiences, but about why they matter to the wider world. What unique value have you provided through your creativity? Let’s explore this further!

I think I’m really good at seeing things from others’ perspectives. This is how I’m ablt to create characters in drama and it’s how I know how to work with my clients in by fashion business. Now, I want to apply these skills at Kenyon College.

Perfect! Your ability to see from various perspectives is a unique strength. Now, connect this to why it’s important. How will this perspective-taking enhance the Kenyon community? How might it contribute to your field of study or future career? This is your “So What?”. You’re not just showing them who you are, but why it matters. What’s the impact of your unique perspective? Let’s weave this into your narrative. Ready for the next step?

Yes/

Fantastic! Now, let’s infuse your essay with the “So What?” element. Reflect on how your ability to see things from others’ perspectives through drama and fashion could enrich the Kenyon community. Consider how these skills could contribute to classroom discussions, group projects, or extracurricular activities. Show them not just who you are, but why you matter. It’s time to make your narrative not just a story, but a compelling case for your admission. Ready to take your essay to the next level?

I want to, but I’m not sure what to write.

No worries! Try answering these questions:

1. How have your acting skills helped you understand people better?

2. How has your fashion business taught you about different cultures or styles?

3. How might these insights enhance discussions or projects at Kenyon?

Remember, this is your chance to show why your uniqueness matters. It’s about your impact beyond personal experiences. Take a moment to ponder these questions and let’s continue to craft your compelling “So What?” narrative. Ready to dive deeper?

Do you have other suggestions for how to start?

Absolutely! Here’s a potential starter: “Through the lens of my acting and fashion business, I’ve discovered the power of perspective-taking. This skill has not only shaped my character but also positively influenced those around me. At Kenyon, I aim to bring this unique insight to enrich classroom discussions, contribute to diverse projects, and foster an inclusive culture. My experiences have taught me the importance of understanding and valuing different viewpoints. I am eager to learn from others at Kenyon, as well as share my own perspectives gained from my creative pursuits.”

Does this feel like a good start? Or would you like to explore other angles?

That’s great, but it doesn’t sound like me.

Understandable! Authenticity is key. Try this approach: “My journey in acting and fashion has given me a unique superpower – seeing things from others’ perspectives. It’s not just about playing a role or selling clothes, it’s about understanding people. That’s something I’m excited to bring to Kenyon. I reckon it will stir up some interesting conversations and bring fresh ideas to projects. Plus, I’m all about learning from others’ viewpoints too.”

Does this sound more like you? Or are there other areas you’d like to touch on?

Funny. No I don’t want you to give me examples. I’m looking for more guidance.

Of course! Consider these steps:

1. Identify the impact: How has perspective-taking through acting and fashion made a difference to you and others?

2. Connect to Kenyon: How will this skill benefit the college community?

3. Look ahead: How might this skill shape your future studies or career?

Remember, your “So What?” is the bridge between your personal experiences and their wider significance. It’s about turning your story into a compelling argument for your place at Kenyon. Ready to give it a shot?

Yeah, I’m going to tak to my teacher now.

Great! Discussing your ideas with your teacher will definitely be helpful. Remember to focus on how your unique perspective impacts others and will contribute to Kenyon College. Don’t hesitate to return if you need more assistance. Good luck with your essay, you’ve got this!

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