allison has
a widow’s peak
always shown
never mentioned
it sits
a frame
for her face
she looks
like dracula
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This is one of the best poems I’ve read recently- I love the unique description that really gives me a good mental image
Hi Holden,
Very interesting poem. I like how you talk about Allison’s widows peak that no one mentions it, yet people think she looks like dracula. Very funny.
Hi Holden,
Awesome poem about your friend, Allison! I really enjoyed it, especially the lines “always shown” and “never mentioned.”
Holden,
Very nice poem and I really enjoyed the comment about looking like Dracula. I found it very funny.