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Chloe
March 16, 2017 2:11 am

This is one of the best poems I’ve read recently- I love the unique description that really gives me a good mental image

Ryan
March 15, 2017 4:48 pm

Hi Holden,
Very interesting poem. I like how you talk about Allison’s widows peak that no one mentions it, yet people think she looks like dracula. Very funny.

Alli
March 15, 2017 4:00 pm

Hi Holden,

Awesome poem about your friend, Allison! I really enjoyed it, especially the lines “always shown” and “never mentioned.”

Josh
March 14, 2017 11:49 pm

Holden,
Very nice poem and I really enjoyed the comment about looking like Dracula. I found it very funny.

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