man on running field

Ismael.
what am I,
am I  the anime kid or am I the oldest
why not both.
Yes I  can be both
an anime kid and the oldest of 4 brothers.
Am I Popular kid or a loser?
Well if i’m being honest
I’m a loser
but that’s ok
I can still have a good life and have fun.
What am I
someone who gives up  on work
but not people yes, yes I am
nothing I  can do  about that
and is there anything wrong with that
the answer is no
and I think because most people care more about work
because they are trying to achieve a goal in life
but I think there should always be someone to  care about the people.
Who am I?
Lastly I’m a runner who runs from everything
and I know that’s not good
but i’m working on it.
So who am I?
I’m an anime kid and the oldest of 4 brothers
but I’m also the loser.
I’m the one who gives up on work but not  people
and we can’t forget i’m a runner
that’s my poem on
well, me
bye! 

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Jeremy
April 5, 2024 10:41 pm

I really like the self expression you did in this writing, you’re also real with yourself acknowledging who you are as a person and you realize it’s ok to be who you are. Sometimes it’s very hard for people to accept who they are and you did just that, you should be proud of yourself for doing so

Nejat
March 22, 2023 11:51 pm

I really enjoyed your poem and it felt almost like a conversation that you’re having with yourself. It kinda reminds me of how some novels start their books like this. Was there a reason you choose this writing style ?

Naomi
March 22, 2023 11:28 pm

I thought this poem was interesting! Why did you choose to use the word loser to describe yourself?

November 18, 2022 7:53 pm

Ismael I found this post very inspiring. You have learned to accept who you are and are not ashamed of who you have become. That is one of the hardest things for anyone to do. On top of that, you have been able to talk about the flaws you see in yourself and are striving to be better. I want to be like you in that way. No matter what anyone has accomplished in comparison to you or in general, you are winning regardless. To take things even further, we all have to respect other people for who they are. A link to an article about it is below:

https://www.psychologytoday.com/us/blog/your-wise-brain/201410/accept-them-they-are

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