I’m a good dad right 

but what does it mean to be a dad 

to take care of my precious cargo 

to provide what they need right

I’m a good dad right 

I’m teaching my son to be a man

but what does it mean to be a man 

to “suck it up” to hide your emotion so you won’t be perceived as weak right 

I’m a good dad right 

I’m only teaching what I have been taught 

My dad taught me how to be a man

how to provide 

how to be strong

I’m a good dad…right?

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Sonia
Sonia
May 15, 2020 8:58 am

I really enjoyed reading your poem. I like that you stated what you think being a good dad means and that you also compared that to what other people think being a good dad is. I also liked that your poem was sweet, short and to the point. This was a good topic to choose and I enjoyed reading it. Overall, great job!

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