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Sean
May 12, 2017 3:44 pm

Dear Williams,

your poem is funny. You express hunger in which you apologize later. Nice poem.

Heidi
April 12, 2017 6:21 pm

I thought this was pretty funny. I typically don’t like poetry, but this was light and easy to read. Nicely done

Anna
April 12, 2017 6:18 pm

This is a fun poem to read. I like cake too

Siena
March 31, 2017 5:40 pm

This is really funny. I feel like we have all done this at one point or another. Does this have some deeper metaphor to your relationship with the person or just simply about eating cake?

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