I remember when I was younger
I remember when times were easier
When I was happier
I remember going to my aunt’s or cousin’s house and seeing the family together
I remember growing up with my big brother
Him introducing me to his friends
Him picking me up from school and taking me out
I remember the memories
My family being close and happy
I remember

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Katie
December 6, 2016 4:26 am

I really like your poem. I always love reminiscing about my childhood. I think you could make this poem better by finding creative ways to start new lines, instead of using “I remember” each line. Other than that I love the memories that you have shared and I think this poem has potential.

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