I am made of crowded parties, with Mexican food, bachata music, and sometimes arguments.

I am made of  coffee in my morning routine, usually black, sometimes add milk, but never with sugar.

I am made of  a family who understands each other, whenever one of us is down or upset we comfort them or get them to laugh.

I am made of  Sunset park, it has such a beautiful view, with great people who gather to reconnect and have fun.

I am made of my sister’s graduation, there were speeches, videos and pictures being taken, and lots of hugs being given.

I am made of never letting people distract me from my goal, because then I’m never going to be able to achieve my dreams.

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Isiah G
November 4, 2022 12:56 pm

Dear Dominick
I am interested in your poem because I like how you say people distract me from my goal because then I’m never going able to achieve my dream and that is true I agree 
One thing piece of imagery that stands out for me is: whenever one of us is down or upset we comfort them or get them to laugh. ” I think this is <interesting, to me because… I like how you say whenever one of us is down or upset we comfort them or get them to laugh.  
Your poem connects to my own experience. For me, 
Thanks for your work on Youth Voices. I look forward to seeing what you write next because… I like your post and I would like to see more of your writing in the near furture  

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