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Sam M
Sam M
December 10, 2019 6:15 pm

I think that having different opinions from others can be good in many cases, but I do disagree that people are good just because they have opposing opinions from someone. I also found your point very hard to find. I think the biggest thing you could do for this piece is reorganize your paragraph structure so that your point is easier to understand.

Roman
December 6, 2019 8:44 pm

While most everyone has different opinions on different things I wouldn’t say everyone is a good person. But I do agree with your last statement. Overall though your paper was really hard to read because of various spelling and grammatical errors. I would suggest working on that if you ever need to write another thing like this again.

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