This is for you my true first love.
I call you haze because I get so high off your love.
You give me the munchies and when I am sad
you make everything so funny.
Your my one and only true love.
You help me with depression
when I feel you between my lips
it's a blessing.
Without you I be stressing
to you I give you my confusion
you are my one and only true love.
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Fredy
April 24, 2019 3:53 pm

DEAR: zyria

estoy asombrada con tu poema HAZE porque aprendí de una nuevo poema que nunca avia escuchado.

una frase que escribio que se destaca para mi es This is for you my true first love es algo que motiva ala jente espero que sigas postiando.

Claudia
April 24, 2019 3:52 pm

Dear Zyria:

I am amazed by you poem, “Haze” because I learned from a new writing that I had never heard.

A phrase that you write that stands out and became important to me is “You are my only true love” because many people have only one love and are not looking for other people just for fun.

Thanks for your writing. I hope to see what you write next, because I want to learn more about poems.

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