In the top, black margin, click Copy to a new draft.
In the top, black margin, click Copy to a new draft.
  • After you finish writing a first, complete draft of your response, use the AI Mojo template
    [Assessing 18] General Discussion Response Assessment
    to get ideas for revising and improving your response. Remember to get a few results.

  • After revising, copy your text from below this line and paste it into a comment box at the bottom of the post you are responding to.

Dear <First Name of Poster>:

I am <adjective showing emotion> <by, about, with> your <post/poem/essay/letter/image…>, “<Exact Title>,” because… <add 2 or 3 sentences>

One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “<Quote from the message.>” I think this is <adjective> because… <add 1 or 2 sentences>

Another sentence that I <past tense verb> was: “<Quote from message>.” This stood out for me because…

<Do some reading online about something that the person you are writing to is interested in.> Have you seen this <article/video/song/book/movie…>? <Include a link to that resource in this comment.> I thought you might be interested in this because of…

Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because… <add 2 or 3 sentences explaining what will bring you back to see more about this person’s thoughts.>


Estimado/a <Nombre de la persona que escribe> :

Estoy < un adjetivo que expresa emoción> <de, con, por> tu <discusión, poema, imagen…>, “<El título>,” porque… <añade 2 o 3 oraciones>

Una oración que escribiste que me llama la atención es “<Cita de la discusión> Creo que esto es <adjetivo> porque… <añade 1 o 2 oraciones>

Otra oración que me <verbo> fue: “<Cita de la discusión>.” Esta me llamó la atención porque…

<Lea en línea sobre algo que le interesa a la persona a la que está escribiendo.> ¿Ha visto este <artículo / video / canción / libro / película …>? <Incluya un enlace a ese recurso en este comentario.> Pensé que podría estar interesado en esto debido a …

Gracias por escribir. Espero leer tu próxima discusión porque <Añade 2 o 3 más oraciones explicando por qué vas a volver a su página para leer más>.

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