Before revision: These responses were written by Ai. I feel as though Ai explained my quotes very well and did not mix up the story at all. The only thing I would say that could be bad about the writing is the grammar. I don’t think AI sometimes understood what I was trying to say and decided to just kinda guess what I was trying to say. How do I feel about AI messing with my comments? I feel like it’s a great and interesting opportunity to see another point of view on my own writing. It makes my writing come to another level.
After revision: I think that AI can be a great tool to provide another perspective on my writing. It can help me to identify areas of improvement and strengthen my credibility by pointing out areas where I need to demonstrate a better command of the issue, draw on personal stories, and make my writing more compelling and artfully crafted. Additionally, AI can help me to identify any errors in my writing that I might have missed. Overall, it provides an invaluable opportunity for furthering my understanding of how to effectively employ a public voice in my writing.
The made by Yosaris T revolves around the idea that people often care too much about what other people think and the mention of race in particular. It is interesting to explore these topics because they can provide insight into the way people interact with one another, and how those interactions can be shaped by societal norms.
The first theme that can be seen is the idea that people care too much about what others think. Yosaris T states, “White people I think he cares too much about what people think because that is how society has put our minds to think. Lots of people think how white people would judge them but it shouldn’t even matter.” This quote speaks to the idea that society has conditioned us to worry about how we will be perceived by people of a certain race. This can be seen in many aspects of life, from the way we dress to the way we talk. This quote is particularly interesting because it speaks to the idea that people should not be judged based on their race, and that caring about what people think should not be a factor in how we conduct ourselves.
The second theme that can be seen is the mention of race. Yosaris T states, “Describing how Lavender smells was really creative. Also, what was the reason for mentioning that he wasn’t white?” This quote speaks to the idea that race can be used as a way to identify someone. It is interesting to explore this idea because it brings up the question of why race is used to identify people, and what purpose it serves. It also raises the question of whether or not race should be used in this manner, and if it is necessary or appropriate.
The third theme that can be seen is the idea of creativity. Yosaris T states, “Describing how Lavender smells was really creative.” This quote speaks to the idea that creativity can be used in many aspects of life, and can be a powerful tool in expressing oneself. It is interesting to explore this idea because it speaks to the idea that creativity can be used to express ideas and emotions that cannot be put into words. It also speaks to the idea that creativity can be used to make connections between people and bring people together in a way that words cannot.
In conclusion, Yosaris T brings up many interesting ideas about how people interact with one another, and how race, creativity, and the way people think can shape these interactions. It is still a mystery, however, as to why race is still used to identify people and why people still care too much about what others think. As I continue reading, I am looking forward to learning more about these topics and gaining a better understanding of them.
