You’ll bring my heart to a stop
Please just do it
I like the feeling
Of your presence
Sweet and white as a dove
Bring my me closer.
Use it
Feel the comfort of me
like if I were a blanket
covering you
on a freezing night.
All of you will bring
My heart
To rest
like you always did.
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I think that this is very beautiful and the fact that this can be interpreted in so many different ways for different people is amazing. I like the structure of your poem a lot and it flows wonderfully and makes the ideas stand out and become more dramatic. I really enjoyed this and I hope that you write more poetry!