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March 20, 2019 4:27 pm

Dear Jillian:

I am excited by your poem, “Define,” because your poem is very cool.

One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “ Marvelous, disastrous, what-
who knows except for your concealed antics, your mind that reflects,your pure,sinister essence.” I think this is very cool because It is a paragraph where you express many feelings.
Thanks for you writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because I liked this poem a lot. I would like to see more poems than you write.

Samantha M.

Iween
March 19, 2019 6:20 pm

I love how mysterious you made the poem sound.It makes me think deeply

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