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Quantel
March 25, 2019 3:04 pm

Dear Iween,
your poem is very inspiring . and put in a lot of feelings/emotion in your poem. and i like how u did your poem in a new / old way u could have put in a little more attached feelings in this poem

Jillian
March 19, 2019 6:22 pm

Dear Iween,
Your poem is very strong. The adjectives you chose evoke a lot of different feelings. You interpreted a syllabic poem in a new and original way. This poem i feel brings awareness to such a difficult topic.

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