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George
March 25, 2019 3:48 pm

Dear Oliver:
I am interested in your poem, “Supercar Supreme,” because I too find cars very intriguing.
One line that stands out for me is, “Determined to have them all In the future” I think this line is Funny because… We all would love to have a supercar one day and I really Hope one day you will achieve you goal.
Your poem reminds me of a poem that I once read. It was also about cars, but rather it was about a bad experience with a car rather than a good one.
Thanks for your poem. I look forward to seeing what you make next. Maybe it will be about cars or maybe something else I know it’s gonna be just as good as this.

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