I am passionate about them
I love the way they
Look
Sound
It started with cars
Then to trucks
Finally to supercars
I memorize them quickly
Quicker than anything else
From the Jesko to the La Voiture Noire
Determined to have them all In the future
Harvest Collegiate High School, New York, New York
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Dear Oliver:
I am interested in your poem, “Supercar Supreme,” because I too find cars very intriguing.
One line that stands out for me is, “Determined to have them all In the future” I think this line is Funny because… We all would love to have a supercar one day and I really Hope one day you will achieve you goal.
Your poem reminds me of a poem that I once read. It was also about cars, but rather it was about a bad experience with a car rather than a good one.
Thanks for your poem. I look forward to seeing what you make next. Maybe it will be about cars or maybe something else I know it’s gonna be just as good as this.