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Caprice
March 23, 2023 11:47 pm

I think the statistics you listed should be talked about way more than what they are! What was your initial reaction when you first found out?

Khayla
March 23, 2023 11:03 pm

I appreciate the way you chose to bring up a topic that is not frequently addressed. You made a strong point about how seriously defective the prison system is. What motivated you to use this strategy?

Wylla
March 23, 2023 10:39 pm

I love how you stated a lot of facts throughout your writing. Where did you find the stats that you have?

March 23, 2023 9:39 pm

This was very well written. I like the picture you included to express your writing. This was a really deep read and was very different.

March 23, 2023 9:15 pm

Have you also considered that another reason may be that it is hard to live after being an ex-con which causes people to fall back into their old ways?

Curtis
March 23, 2023 3:25 pm

I like the image using the Black Panter is really good

Jeffrey
March 23, 2023 5:43 am

I really like the image you selected.

Kaesy
March 23, 2023 3:09 am

I love how you took the approach of shedding light on an issue that is usually not discussed. The incarceration system is very flawed and you really brought attention to that. What inspired you to take this approach?

Olasubomi
March 23, 2023 2:52 am

I absolutely enjoyed reading this. You hit the nail on the head in breaking down the flawed incarceration system. I do agree that subjecting inmates to such a system does no help in rehabilitation but instead makes matter more complicated. .

Darryl
March 23, 2023 1:36 am

Your picture is very pleasing.

Ebenezer
March 23, 2023 12:38 am

The System is very messed up and I liked how you shed light on it

Christopher S
March 23, 2023 12:08 am

You did a great job conveying your message about the flaws of our incarceration system and how it is a cycle that makes it hard for people to step out of.

Amani
March 23, 2023 12:00 am

Your picture speaks volumes. “No Justice,No Peace”! Great Work!

Abeer
March 22, 2023 11:51 pm

I really loved reading your post because it contained some insightful ideas. But how do you believe we could change this system?

Esther
March 22, 2023 11:51 pm

I really like the way you connections you made and how deep you went.
Amazing

March 22, 2023 11:36 pm

I really like you picture and your essay was powerful.

David
March 22, 2023 11:30 pm

I really like how deep you got into this and I liked all the number break downs did the AI make your picture?

Destine
March 22, 2023 2:24 pm

Wow! this was very touching. Amazing work!!

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