Original blurb: As I start to use AI mojo more I feel structured. Using it consistently has also given a sense of place because as we continue to use AI mojo for the same things I have adapted to navigating certain things without being told. I honestly expected AI mojo to be a lot more of a failure simply because it’s a newer website but it’s actually better than expected. It has even helped me outside of English class because it helps me elaborate more on my ideas and determine what I like best without settling. For instance,by recreating my idea without changing it when I generate my ideas.
My Strengths: In this text, I demonstrate a command of the issue by introducing AI mojo and providing an evaluation of its effectiveness. I draw on personal stories to build connection and empathy with my reader by describing how it has impacted me both in and out of English class. The language I use is also compelling and artfully crafted with relatively few errors.
Areas I might improve upon: To further strengthen my credibility, it would be helpful to include more concrete examples that illustrate how AI mojo has helped me elaborate on my ideas and determine what I like best without settling. Additionally, adding more detail about why I expected AI mojo to be a failure could help the reader better understand the significance of its success for me.