Life Academy of Health and Biosciene, Oakland, California
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Dear Joe,
To start off, I like the title of your memoir. It got my attention. I enjoyed reading your piece. I hope to read more. Thanks for sharing a piece of your life with me and other people.
This comic is a good piece of work. The graphic weight I noticed was you stading near a couple buildings and just standing there as if you are thinking. Also the part where your comic charcter says you have a chance not alot of people have was good grphic weihgt.