My topic is about sexism in media and how it effects women and how they are seen in society.
The strength I have in my 30 second hook is that I am loud clear. I could improve on giving more emotion on what I say because it is a serious topic and I have to sound more motivational.
Looking back at the video was awkward but yet I felt like it could help me analyze what I need to stop doing and what I can further improve on.