3 Comments
  1. Jovana 3 weeks ago

    I like your poem because it’s short and so powerful. Keep writing poems like this one!

  2. Abigail 4 weeks ago

    This poem is authentically beautiful. What caught me was the picture of the train, it was what made me click on this post. As I read the poem I got even more impressed. I love all the elements you added to this, what your home sounds like, what its called and what the community is like. I am glad to hear it is a close knit community, similar to a family. Overall your poem is 10/10, keep writing and I am sure you could make it to 11/10.

  3. Jalaya 4 weeks ago

    I like it. It’s short and real

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