2 Comments
  1. Quantel 6 months ago

    Dear Iween,
    your poem is very inspiring . and put in a lot of feelings/emotion in your poem. and i like how u did your poem in a new / old way u could have put in a little more attached feelings in this poem

  2. Jillian 6 months ago

    Dear Iween,
    Your poem is very strong. The adjectives you chose evoke a lot of different feelings. You interpreted a syllabic poem in a new and original way. This poem i feel brings awareness to such a difficult topic.

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