Immigrants Create A Better Community

 

“I think they’re great, they are what keep Oakland from turning into a “white- washed” community. Immigrants bring the culture to Oakland”( Hernandez). Claudia Hernandez, a 30 year old who has lived in Oakland her whole life shared a quote explaining her thoughts on immigration. To begin, immigrants need to continue to be  welcomed to Oakland and appreciated because they create a more diverse, democratic community and are hardworking and contribute to the economy.

DEMOCRATIC AND DIVERSE

Immigrants in Oakland create a better democracy with more diversity. In the article Here’s The Right Way To Create New, Diverse Businesses by Christine Lagorio, it addresses an interview she had with the Mayor Of Oakland, Libby Schaaf. The interview confirms what the Mayor feels  when it comes to immigration. The article states,Some undocumented immigrants, have become so woven into our communities. Having a diversity of perspectives and life experiences is a vital part of both our democracy, and of a creative, evolving society. These are values that I know my community celebrates” (Lagorio). Schaff states “These are values that I know my community celebrates”, to show how appreciated immigrants are in the community. Oakland values what immigrants bring to the community, immigrants allow there to be more diversity and many different people with all different stories. Immigrants in Oakland create a better future, children will grow up in a community where they can learn from many people from all over the world. This is important because immigration is creating something different for Oakland. To add, another quote from the article, 3 Ways immigrants Are Helping American Culture and Business Soar by Anjana Sreedhar (a news writer) can also support how immigrants bring the diversity. Sreedhar writes, “Thanks to immigrants, America is able to increase its language capacity. Diversity of cultures also fosters diversity of thinking and overall tolerance, especially because immigrants mesh their cultural practices with American customs”(Sreedhar). Here one can see the  benefits of having a lot of diversity in a community like Oakland. Immigration allows there to be more opportunities for Americans, they get a chance to interact with more people who come from different countries and who speak different languages. Therefore, they don’t disregard immigrants because Oakland values immigrants for what they bring to the community.

ECONOMIC BENEFIT

Secondly, Immigrants don’t come to America to commit crimes, they come for a better future. They arrive to Oakland looking for jobs that they wouldn’t be able to find in their own countries, meaning that they positively impact the economy as well. In an interview with an Oakland resident and a College Track Oakland staff member, Liz Fuentes, she \states,  “Many people, including our president, believe that immigrants bring more violence, drugs and gangs to Oakland. But in reality I believe that they bring a lot of diversity which is very good. They are also good for our economy because they come here looking for a place to work”( Fuentes).  Immigrants help the Oakland community with the economy and diversity. Immigration makes a strong contribution to the economic growth in Oakland. The economy is benefitted by immigrants who begin their own businesses allowing non-immigrant people to also have jobs. Also, the amount of money that people make with their jobs would increase as the economy begins to offer more resources.

However, some may think that immigration causes severe issues. Immigrants are seen to be thieves, gang members, and drug lords. But In reality immigrants are people who want to live in America like everyone else. In an interview with Delmira Regalado, an Oakland resident for the past 16 years now and immigrant herself, Delmira speaks about who immigrants truly are. She states, “In general immigrants aren’t bad. We are just hard working people trying to make living. I’ve been in this country 16 years now and not once have I tried to hurt someone or put anyone at risk” ( Regalado). Regalado  is trying to enlighten others to leave behind the stereotypes that people have towards immigrants. Many people assume the worst of immigrants just because they move from one country to another. It is unfair for immigrants to live with the fact that people don’t trust or see them as real people. Immigrants are human too, they do so much for the Oakland community and Oakland values and appreciates it all.

In conclusion, Immigrants are wanted and needed in the community because they bring the diversity and the economical benefits to Oakland. Immigrants are what keep Oakland different from any other community. Immigration allows Oakland to be unique and valuable.

 

Work cited:

Fuentes, Liz. “Immigration Interview.” 12 Dec. 2018. 

I interviewed Liz Fuentes about immigrants and how they better Oakland. Liz is an Oakland Resident and a College Track Oakland staff member.

 

Hernandez, Claudia. “Immigration Interview.” 10 Dec. 2018.

I interviewed Claudia Hernandez, a 30 year old who has lived in Oakland her whole life and witnessed immigration expand.

 

Lagorio-Chafkin, Christine. “Oakland Mayor Libby Schaaf on Immigration, Diversity, and Entrepreneurship.” Inc.com, Inc., 14 Mar. 2018, www.inc.com/christine-lagorio/oakland-mayor-libby-schaaf-interview.html.

Libby Schaaff is a credible source because she is apart of the democratic party supporting immigrants arrviving to America. She is also the Mayor of Oakland.

 

Sreedhar, Adjana. “3 Ways Immigrants Are Helping American Culture and Business Soar.” Mic, Mic Network Inc., 26 Oct. 2015, mic.com/articles/28614/3-ways-immigrants-are-helping-american-culture-and-business-soar.

Adjana is the New York University, Everyday Ambassador.

 

Regalado, Delmira. “Immigration Interview.” 10 Dec. 2018. I interviewed Delmira Regalado an Oakland resident for the past 16 years now, and an immigrant herself.

 

 

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7 Comments
  1. Alex 1 month ago

    Hello Marleni,

    Let me first start out by saying that I really appreciate you having the courage to discuss such a difficult topic. I think you make some excellent points throughout your argument, and I particularly enjoyed the section that discussed the cultural assets that immigrants bring to the United States. Diversity exposes us to new perspectives and traditions that only serve to benefit our lives and make us more empathetic. I also enjoyed your section on the economic benefits of immigration, but I would encourage you to find statistics that support your claims. While I agree with your arguments, someone who may not agree with you will find it unconvincing unless there is evidence to back up your claims. Some topics you can consider researching are how much money immigrants pay in taxes in each year, what sorts of jobs immigrants take and why those jobs are important to the American economy. Once again I would like to thank you for discussing such an important topic. It is students like you who are going to make a positive impact on this world. Keep exploring the world around you and never stop asking questions!

    Best Regards,
    Alex

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    Marleni 2 months ago

    Thank you so much for reading my blog. The Part of your comment that stood out to me was “it was super interesting and it was very clear as well”. A question I have for you is what was your favorite part of my blog? Look forward to back!

  3. Irvin 2 months ago

    Marleni

    I liked reading your blog because it was super interesting and it was very clear as well to what you want to change or bring awareness to. I like the quote you used in the beginning because it tells us what what it’s going to be about. I really liked the strong interviews you had and the pieces of evidence that you had because it made your argument very strong. I think your work is strong and keep doing good.

  4. Maria 2 months ago

    Dear Marleni,
    I like the fact that you added 2 interview and your own perspective on what you think what will be better for oakland like bringing culture back. I want to say good job for completing your blog it talks about good topic and it seem that you put a lot of work on it. I agree with your main point that immigrant just come to america to have a better future.

  5. Anahi 2 months ago

    Dear Marleni,

    First of Marleni I want to say good job on completing your Blog. Good job on your interviews you asked very good questions ad got good answers to make your blog stronger. Also I like when you said, “Many people assume the worst of immigrants just because they move from one country to another” because it’s very true immigrants are stereotyped and face stigma due to the fact that they’re moving to a different country to have a better future for themselves and their family. Continue to work hard you been doing good.

  6. Edwin 2 months ago

    Dear Marleni,

    I like how you used 2 interviews and 2 sources to show that Immigrants create a better future with more diversity in the communities, bringing culture in Oakland, and having more ways to have a good life. BUT you should’ve talk more about your argument to expand your thinking and have more reasons why Immigrants show more opportunities!

    Edwin M.

  7. Yasmin 2 months ago

    Dear Marleni

    I agree with the first quote started “I think they’re great, they are what keep Oakland from turning into a “white- washed” community. Immigrants bring the culture to Oakland”. I agree with this because without immigrants it wouldn’t be the same. One sentence that stands out to me is how you said “Immigration allows there to be more opportunities for Americans, they get a chance to interact with more people who come from different countries and who speak different languages.” because its VERY TRUE people can meet new people and not be use to the same people. Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because your work is very amazing.

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