For this poem I had to connect a topic from Shakespear to my own life. I chose to write about my mom because my topic is about love. I look forward to reading your comments!

 

The Universe Within Us

Ever since

you left the sanctuary

of your home,

Gunshot after gunshot

Scream past your ear

But all you do is run.

You run and run because although half of you

Is trembling with fear,

And dripping with tears,

The other half of you wants nothing more

But to hear the cries of tu primera hija

At least once more

before the tears of being separated from the arms that once held her and blocked the dangers of the world out

Become deeper with the pain the other half of the world has to offer

Before,

The border splitting the earth,

Splits you too.

You haven’t stopped running since.

The borders haven’t stopped splitting your body either.

Sideways, upwards, downwards.

Parts of you filled with fear,

Some filled with shame,

And yet another filled with the spanish you’ve learned to silence

Because something about the sharpness of your tongue

And the thickness of your accent

Brings out the bravery beneath the cracks,

The wholeness beneath the broken,

And the beauty hidden by the hate.

Y todos sabemos,

That borders cant stand

If there’s something stronger and taller

Capable of breaking them down.

You haven’t stopped running since.

Parts of you running with the brightness within you

Trying to drive out the darkness that surrounds you,

Trying to close up on you

Just like all the other borders

orbiting around you.

You haven’t stopped running since,

Trying to get ahold of the world

That was taken from your hands

By hateful eyes,

And too many people

Forcing your nights

To be filled with cries.

You’re trying to get ahold of the world that was once in your hands

Just to give it to me.

Because despite the tornados spiraling inside my body

And the black hole in my mind trying to to grab on to any negative thought

That brings out the darkness in my eyes,

All you see is the sun,

The planets orbiting it,

And the stars that decorate the universe with the light you believe I deserve to feel instead.

Ama,

You see the light in the world

And inside me too.

Ama, when will you stop running?

When will you let us finish for you?

When will you realize that the world

You want to get ahold of

Is already inside of me

Because it’s inside you too.

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3 Comments
  1. Jessica 17 hours ago

    Dear Judith

    I am very touched by your poem, “The Universe Within Us”, because the relationship that you show in your poem of you and your mom is beautifully shown with all the metaphors that you use of the universe. One part of your poem that stands for me is where you wrote, “And the stars that decorate the universe with the light you believe I deserve to feel instead”. This stood out to me because I can tell that you really put a lot of effort into this poem. Also, I like how the title of your poem matches the poem really nicely. Another part that I stood out to me is the last six lines. This stood out to me because I think it really brings out your topic. Thanks for your poem. I look forward to what you make next because this poem was amazing.

  2. Calvin 1 day ago

    Dear Judith, I think your poem is really interesting because it’s crazy to think that people have had to go through these experiences. I really like how you included a lot of metaphors into your poem as well, it’s really creative and meaningful. My favorite line was “Trying to get ahold of the world
    That was taken from your hands
    By hateful eyes,” because it made me think about how we really have this problem in the world right now. The hate part is also true and I like how you put in the word “eyes” because they don’t see some people as human.

  3. Mikayla 6 days ago

    Dear Judith

    Thank you so much for sharing your poetry. A line that stood out to me was “Trying to drive out the darkness that surrounds you,

    Trying to close up on you

    Just like all the other borders

    orbiting around you.” because it really described how Trump is separating families and taking away kids.

    A connection I made to your poem was close to an movie I saw.

    Your poem also reminded me of a beautiful description of a love movie.

    Thank you so much for writing and I look forward to reading your next post.

    Mikayla

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