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Yes the people are beautiful like the color white paper

but some people  smell like they don’t take  showers

but the platform is up high, and

The air is  fresh and  it make me feels good as  I am standing there.

The inside of the subway has the bird poop.

Outside the subway had the fresh air

 

 

 

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