Point of View Writing

Yes the people are beautiful like the color white paper

but some people  smell like they don’t take  showers

but the platform is up high, and

The air is  fresh and  it make me feels good as  I am standing there.

The inside of the subway has the bird poop.

Outside the subway had the fresh air





CC BY-SA 4.0 Megan’s My Beautiful Neighborhood by Megan is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 4.0 International License.

1 Comment
  1. Keeba 2 weeks ago

    Dear Megan,I like the way you use imagery to give me a clear whiff of how the subway near you live. Its funny how you told the truth put still was able to capture the feeling. Judging by the smells you described im sure you hate it, as do I. I liked in line 3 when you said ” the platform is too high” do you have any suggestions for MTA? Possibly to make it shorter and safer ?

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