Dear Youth Voices Community,
My name is Alex Ramirez, and I am an 11th-grade student at Fremont High School.
I feel very powerful about doing my Capstone research before my senior year starts. If I make mistakes, I still have a lot of time to make changes.
This is my current thesis statement about deportation: The excessive amount of time it takes for U.S citizenship papers to be processed causes Mexican people to emigrate illegally.
In order for my thesis to be considered proficient, I have to do well in my research. Based on the rubric it says that getting a 3, or Proficient, means I have to format a focused and argument thesis about a social inequity problem. My thesis will help guide how I read my sources and conduct my field research.
I would greatly appreciate your feedback and help on my thesis statement as it is written so far.
Alex Matias Ramirez
Fremont High School
Architecture & Design Academy
Class of 2019Tags: #LATINOS #seniorproject #stopdeportation deportation freemont-high-school