1. Stephanie 11 months ago

    Hey Saul,

    I really liked your piece because it made me smile since I can totally imagine this in my head. Anyway, your picture of the broken arm was really good. I like that you talk about the bond that you and your brother have and how the love between you two created this love that you have for soccer. I could sort of relate to your comic because that is how my brother was with me, he’s what got me to like soccer. Maybe that’s why I really like your comic, which means its really good!!


  2. David 11 months ago

    Dear Saul,

    I really like your piece because you talk about your brother and that has to do with family dynamics and you also talk about love and how you love soccer. I only wished that you still enjoyed playing in the rain like you used to. I want to hear more from you life experiences. Pues chido guey.

  3. Gerardo 11 months ago

    I like the way that you didn’t use sort of like a box on your last drawing. Also I like the story that you shared with your brother on how you started to play.

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