The wide sky
The blue ocean
The colorful umbrellas
The flying kite
The looming moon
It’s the place where is full of laughing and joy
I am OK that I stand outside of the beautiful scenery
Like that bird
Free and lonely
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I think myself as a free bird
People think me as a controlled slave
Whatever
I am high and human can’t fly
I am so beautiful like performing ballet in the sky
I can see the blue of ocean
I can fly in the broader area
But where is my home
I’m lonely
Do you?

CC BY-SA 4.0 Two Poems for Beautiful Beach by Luyao is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 4.0 International License.

7 Comments
  1. Xuefeng 5 months ago

    The nice poem
    The good description
    The beautiful artistic conception
    The great job
    The good idea
    It’s the poem to describe the blue ” sky ”
    I am ready that I join the world of this poem again
    Like that poet
    Free and Lonely

    I think myself as a lonely poet
    Secularism can not stop me keep walking
    Whatever
    I am quiet and heard sounds of world
    I can see the light of my heart
    I can through the darkness way
    But I’m still lost
    I am lonely
    Do you?

    hell yeahhhhhhhhhhhhh .

  2. Cindy 5 months ago

    Dear unique Luyao
    I am reading about your beautiful poems
    called “Two poems for beautiful ocean,”
    Because I love it deeply.
    One part of your poem that stands out for me is your beautiful sentence and your expression
    I think this is so wonderful because you used your words to express a such great view.
    Another part that I enjoyed is where you describe yourself as one who out of the picture. This stood out for me.
    Because I can feel what you are thinking about.I understand what you feel like,lonely and want to have friends.
    Thanks for your wonderful poems. I look forward to seeing what
    you make next, because I love you forever.
    Best wishes with your art,
    Cindy Orellana

    Love you forever ever ever ever!

  3. Aliyabanu 5 months ago

    i liked how u put yourself in a object describes it how they feel over there.

  4. Cindy 5 months ago

    Good job! I liked yours poems because you used stanzas and u describe the beach.

  5. Aliyabanu 5 months ago

    Dear Luyao

    I am happy about how you wrote your poem, “two poems for beautiful beach,” because i like how u said like a u are the bird flying in the sky.

    One part of your poem that stands out for me is where you says i feel like a free bird, but where is my home. I think this is awesome because… it show’s that birds fly where they want to and they are free but they don’t really have a home to stay like humans

    Thanks for your poem. I look forward to seeing what you make next, because… i like the way u put yourself in place of an object and describe how that object feels in it’s place, i want u to write more poems like that.

  6. Cindy 5 months ago

    Good job! I liked yours poem because you used stanzas and you describe the beach.

  7. Emely 5 months ago

    i liked because you describe, the beauty of the beach.

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