4 Comments
  1. Summer2017 4 weeks ago

    I’m really like how did you let the natural to talk about what it giving us.

  2. Luyao 4 weeks ago

    Dear Emely,
    I read about your paragraph,
    called “ my purpose ”,
    I looked at your words,I just thought it grabs my eyes.
    I think the point of view is the tree,it says something about leaves.
    The leaves use theirs magic to give happiness and relaxation to people.
    Through your words,I could know what leaves think is even though they are small,but they still want to let people feel good when they come here.
    Another part that I enjoyed is where the picture let me think about peace.I can feel that.
    Because green is always the color of peace and relaxation.
    Thanks for your paragraph

    Best wishes with your work,
    Luyao

  3. Yehara 4 weeks ago

    I like how you said that the nature of that place give relax to the ones who let it. Nice work!!

  4. Yehara 4 weeks ago

    I like how you said that the nature of that place give us relax only watching her beauty. Nice work !!

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