4 Comments
  1. Louise 11 months ago

    Dear Hassan,

    Thanks for this poem about the rainbow. I really like how you repeated the word “earth” so that it sounds like a rhyming poem. The affected me because it is simple and makes it a poem.

    I can’t wait to read more of your writing! Best of luck!

    Louise

  2. Xuefeng 2 years ago

    Your did a great job. I like your poem and your picture. Your poem and picture linked each other. Everything looks very beautiful.

  3. Taha 2 years ago

    I’m really like your poem. And I know you are a poet.

  4. Luyao 2 years ago

    I love your sentence,it’s really beautiful.

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