The topic of my 30-second hook was about what my senior project is about and why I choose the topic. I was trying to present about truancy in urban school districts.

I had to record myself 9 times to create the final version that I uploaded.

My strengths were eye contact and the volume of my voice. I need to work on my tone and my pacing.

It feels weird watching myself on the recording. My confidence with oral presentation has improved because now i know what i need to work on.


CC BY-SA 4.0 Presenting Your 30-Second Hook by Jaymee is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 4.0 International License.


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