Click here for the video of my 30-second hook!

The topic of my 30 second hook is Oakland rent is too expensive.

I record myself 3 times to get the final uploaded.

I need to work on my body language and eye context and keep on track of my presentation.

I felt a little bit stupid because I seen a lot of mistake on my presentation.


CC BY-SA 4.0 XP4: My 30-second Hook by Fatafehi is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 4.0 International License.


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