1. Natalya 3 years ago

    This is such a lovely little poem. It is so sweet in so few words! It also holds a little bit of nostalgia and sadness that I also like and makes me wonder what happened as well. Great work!

  2. Brenda 3 years ago

    I honestly love this. In such short words it says a lot more than what you expect. This goes really deep in my opinion.

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