1. Jackson 2 years ago

    I definitely like the them you are going for here. I think you could afford a little more on the overall concept but the story and necessary development for it are definitely present. Good work.

  2. Anna 2 years ago

    Nikki, this is a good poem. I go to a catholic school so I know about lent and how hard it is so give something up for that long. This is great, good work!

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