1. Sean 10 months ago

    Dear Williams,

    your poem is funny. You express hunger in which you apologize later. Nice poem.

  2. Heidi 11 months ago

    I thought this was pretty funny. I typically don’t like poetry, but this was light and easy to read. Nicely done

  3. Anna 11 months ago

    This is a fun poem to read. I like cake too

  4. Siena 12 months ago

    This is really funny. I feel like we have all done this at one point or another. Does this have some deeper metaphor to your relationship with the person or just simply about eating cake?

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