1. Chloe 3 years ago

    This is one of the best poems I’ve read recently- I love the unique description that really gives me a good mental image

  2. Ryan 3 years ago

    Hi Holden,
    Very interesting poem. I like how you talk about Allison’s widows peak that no one mentions it, yet people think she looks like dracula. Very funny.

  3. Alli 3 years ago

    Hi Holden,

    Awesome poem about your friend, Allison! I really enjoyed it, especially the lines “always shown” and “never mentioned.”

  4. Josh 3 years ago

    Very nice poem and I really enjoyed the comment about looking like Dracula. I found it very funny.

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