1. Autumn 3 years ago

    Hi Ariel! I loved your poem the words were very easy to picture and I love this cover photo it goes along perfectly with your poem.

  2. Vicky 4 years ago

    This is a very great poem. It is very insightful and welcoming in a way. I liked it. 🙂

  3. Andre 4 years ago

    That poem was great it was so happy and it put a smile on my face after reading it.

  4. Kayla 4 years ago

    Your poem reminds me of the same exact feeling that you had. It feels like your becoming the sun from the sense of nature to being a human being. This was very lovely, I love your poem.

  5. Ryan 4 years ago

    Hey Ariel,
    This is a very happy poem. When I finished i had a smile on my face. Your line ” I was the sun” is very powerful. Kind of says ” it all revolves around me.” Great work!

  6. Alli 4 years ago

    Hi Ariel,

    I loved your poem! It had great imagery and made me happy.

  7. Kendall 4 years ago


    What a nice poem! I enjoyed imagining the sun shining brightly and more brightly as I read this. Was there a specific experience that inspired you to write about this?

  8. Kenzie 4 years ago

    very beautiful!! 🙂

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