2 Comments
  1. Alli 2 years ago

    Hi Holden! I really like this poem. It has great imagery! It reminds me when I saw Louis the Child, have you ever heard of them?

  2. Ariel 2 years ago

    Holden,
    This is a really beautiful poem. It;s like I’m at the rave (even though I’ve never been to one). Thank you so much for sharing.
    Ariel 🙂

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