1. Markie 2 years ago

    This a beautiful way to describe a shell!! I think it would have been even more intriguing than it already was if you added a couple more lines about the shell. Just some thoughts anyways good job!

  2. Fernando 2 years ago

    That’s a beautiful shell, I love the Bahamas.

  3. Ana 2 years ago

    The shell is very nice! I liked the poem because you describe the shell and more in just a few words.

  4. Valeria 2 years ago

    The article is very descriptive of the shell, it has lots of details.

  5. Daniela 2 years ago

    I think that this is a great article. The shell looks beautiful and the way that it is described is also good.

  6. Maria Paula 2 years ago

    i think the article is really good, and it really describes the shell. The shell is really pretty.

  7. Diana 2 years ago

    This poem is interesting because you described the shell in just few words. Good job!

  8. Daniel 2 years ago

    The shell is described with close attention and I was able to imagine how it looked and felt. Your metaphors really enhance your context. It was a really nice writing piece! 🙂

  9. Isabella 2 years ago

    I think the article was really good and the shell was beautiful.

  10. Maria 2 years ago

    I really like the article and how you explained the shell. I think the shell is really nice. Amazing article!!

  11. Susy 2 years ago

    the shell is very beautiful and it is very nice how you say the article. very educative!

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