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  1. Gigi 4 years ago

    I think that this is very beautiful and the fact that this can be interpreted in so many different ways for different people is amazing. I like the structure of your poem a lot and it flows wonderfully and makes the ideas stand out and become more dramatic. I really enjoyed this and I hope that you write more poetry!

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