Dear Youth Voices Community,
My name is William Jacobs and I am in the Media Academy at Fremont High School, and I feel confident about my senior project because I enjoy my topic.
This is my current thesis statement:
Traditional teaching can lead some students into boredom which can lead them not to come to school or that class. They need some sort or booster or inspiration in their classroom like some sort of social media activity or video game activity that is school related so the students can get involved, we can do this using our computer in class.
Fremont High School seniors are now writing preliminary thesis statements to help guide how they read their sources. I would greatly appreciate your feedback and help on my preliminary thesis statement. If you could score my thesis statement using this rubric, that would be even more helpful!!!
Fremont High School
Gamification and Education by William is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 4.0 International License.