Dear Youth Voices Community,

My name is Valeria Fernandez, I am a senior in the Media Academy at Fremont High School. We are currently working on our research for our senior project. Working on my process journal three was pretty stressful because I had to find right sources that were trustworthy and informative.  

This is my current thesis statement:

Social media and tech jobs such as Facebook, Google, Instagram, and twitter are running our world but those jobs are mostly being run by men which means we don’t see the perspective of women. Most STEM jobs are being filled by men, and women are being left behind. The inequality in the tech industry is huge but it can be fixed. Big tech companies can have internships and programs that will groom high school girls to embrace technology creation from a young age, young adults, who will help and motivate young girls knowing they have support from big companies.

Fremont High School seniors are now writing preliminary thesis statements to help guide how they read their sources. I would greatly appreciate your feedback and help on my preliminary thesis statement. If you could score my thesis statement using this rubric, that would be even more helpful!!!

Valeria Fernandez
Fremont High School

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