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  1. Mack 2 years ago

    Hi Carla! I love how you name all the things that are very close to your heart, and make you happy. This poem gives the reader a better idea of who you are as an individual and its great. What would make this poem even better is if you were to use more descriptive language and imagery to really evoke the readers imagination. I want to see what you love exactly the way you see it.

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