I am from Oakland. Land of the hyphy.

Where I play ball and most of the people all like me.


My town is full of creativity and art.

Where people have fun, rap, and take bart.


My Mom works hard for my family and me.

And in return for my grades I bring home a C.


I can do better. I will do better. If not what’s it all for?

To live my whole life with a closed door?


No, I want to get chances.

To make money and major advances.


I can’t do that if I am trippin’ up.

For that to happen I have to go up.



CC BY-SA 4.0 Opening Doors by Elon is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 4.0 International License.

  1. William 2 years ago

    This is a very nice poem

  2. Destiny 2 years ago

    your poem is wet

  3. Destiny 2 years ago

    your poem is telling people the truth

  4. Tamara 2 years ago

    ok ok elon straight bars

  5. Nomar 2 years ago

    ok brudderrr

  6. Ruqayah 2 years ago

    Nice poem

  7. Ray 2 years ago

    I like your poem it’s pretty cool.

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