5 Comments
  1. Nathan 10 months ago

    This is really well written. I felt a connection between you and your writing, and the descriptive detail was great. By far one of the best things I have read on here.

  2. Jackson 11 months ago

    I have to say this piece struck me. I have yet to read a better formatted paper on this site. Your use of vivid detail and vibrant description was able to make me shiver in real time. It seems you have a deep personal connection from your essay and I hope you continue your work in this fashion.

  3. Joselyn 11 months ago

    This is one of the best poems/stories i have read, it was greatly written and very descriptive, a lot imagery, so that was amazing.

  4. Mei 11 months ago

    I like how your writing is so detailed that can picture everything in my head and it’s too long.

  5. Quest 11 months ago

    This is a very descriptive and detailed poem

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